The Amazing Story Generator

amazing-story-generator-coverI came across this awesome title at the New York Public Library Store on Fifth Ave about two years ago. It’s called The Amazing Story Generator and yes, it is amazing.

Inside this spiral notebook are three sets of pages. The top page supplies a setting or inciting event, the middle page provides a protagonist, and the last page presents a conflict or obstacle. You can mix and match the pages however you want to generate enough stories to last a lifetime. The layout of the book is great because if you open it and like the setting and conflict you’re given but not the protagonist, you can skim through the top pages until you find one that jives. This works for all of the pages.

I’ll be using this book to stretch my writing muscles by tackling different prompts and exercises which I’ll post to this blog (of course)! What books or websites do you like referring to for writing-prompt material? Feel free to share in the comments below!

Inktober 2016

inktober_promptsIt’s Inktober! Woot! Woot! I actually took time and came up with 31 drawing prompts. No guarantee I’ll keep up with them all but it was fun making the list!

For those looking for prompts you’re welcome to follow mine. The list on the left is of little things that should be drawn big. The list on the right is of big things that should be drawn small.

Have fun and please feel free to share a link to your #inktober illustrations via the comments box below.

Frankenstein Fish

Blogging is like having an aquarium, but without lives at stake.

Let me start at the beginning. You decide to get a fish tank. Why? Because you like fish and you got mad fishy-ideas! You’re ready for the world to see your awesome fish-abilities! You pick out a tank that suits your needs, you get a fish, drop it in your tank, and BAM! You’ve got an aquarium!

You’re excited! You’re bustin’ out mad fishy ideas and next thing you know you’ve got six fish in your tank!

But then you hit a wall.

Well, not so much a wall as a hill; a Hill of the Mind. And suddenly, adding new fish to the tank becomes difficult and unenjoyable. You change tanks thinking maybe a new design will spark your enthusiasm and help you generate new fishy-ideas but it doesn’t. Bottom line: aquarium maintenance -–much like blogging -–is not a joke.

If my blog really were a fish tank my fish would be belly-up in the murkiest water. All summer long my blog felt like a burden.  I’ve been unfocused and then felt guilty for not posting content. To be honest, I read in a How-To-Blog article that if your blog’s not providing a service or information then it’s an online diary. Appalled by this notion, I took a few months to come up with a new game plan. I tried to write posts which would provide a service to readers, but soon I realized I don’t know enough about writing and publishing to be able to drop post after post of knowledge.

After an unproductive summer, I reread my earlier blog posts in the hopes of rekindling my love for blogging and remember why I started a blog in the first place. While these early posts did not provide much guidance there’s an honesty behind them I want to get back to. When providing a service, it’s important to acknowledge what you know as well as what you don’t. I acknowledge that I don’t know a lot, but my experience as a writer working in children’s book publishing is material I want to share and will hopefully be enough for interested readers to learn from; or at least be amused by.

That said, I’m cleaning out my fish tank, plopping in a cool pirate ship, and Frankenstein-ing my fish back to life!

Feel free to check out some of my older posts by clicking here and here!

Also, for all (two) of you Friday Floetry fans interested in seeing more unedited poems inspired by observations from my commute, I will be bringing Friday Floetry back in 2017!

True or False: I am the only person who finds blogging difficult?……. FALSE! Share your biggest blogging obstacles and/or advice on overcoming them in the comments below.

 

When Ideas Come Knockin’

I really want to focus on my life, but I haven’t written in a week and the creative ideas are coming for me. That’s right. Not to me but for me.

There’s this box in my brain where I store all my potential story ideas. But it seems the box’s lid has come loose. And by loose I mean it’s been flung open.

Usually, when I get an idea, it plops into my mind. I scrape all its bits of content up with a shiny spatula and pancake-flip it into the box where it waits to be tended to.

Having little time to give my ideas, the box is now overflowing and the Ideas won’t be contained! They’re demanding to be heard and realized. Each is rippling with potential but not yet developed. They’re dilapidated; dancing like the creatures from Michael Jackson’s Thriller, and I’m the girl running ridiculously down a deserted street to avoid them. But there’s no way to hide from myself.

My little Frankenstein monsters especially love coming to the forefront of my attention during quiet times like work meetings. As I try to pay attention to the presentation of this quarter’s sale statistics, I feel something knocking at the door to the back of my mind. A quick look inward tells me it’s that princess character whose name I have yet to determine.

“Yoo hoo!” She coos. “Given any thought to my name yet? I was thinking it would be most appropriate if it had a lot of A’s in it! The points on my crown are shaped like A’s so it’s very fitting, don’t you think? Also, I was hoping you’d given more though to my hair because I –”

BANG

Finally! I manage to get the door closed and her chattering ceases.

Oh no! Due to her distracting yammering I’ve tuned out again. What did the presenter just say?  Something about… book sails?  No! He must have meant book sales, but it’s too late. I’m already thinking about giant ships catching strong winds in billowing sails made of pages and pages of children’s literature. The massive vessel operated by a skilled team of Sales pirates; a menagerie of pegged legs, patched eyes, and hooked hands whose collective love for the sea comes second only to their love of reading. Able to quote every passage printed on their ship’s sails, they sail the seas spreading the power of words with each adventure!

It’s a great idea, but I have no time for it! Especially not now as I’m trying to focus on this meeting.

Has a great idea ever come to you at a most inopportune time? Feel free to share in a comment!

NaPiBoWriWee 2016 Day 1

It’s May, and that means it’s National Picture Book Writing Week (Napibowriwee)! Woot Woot!

Created by children’s book rock star Paula Yoo, Napibowriwee runs the first week of May, during which time participants aim to write seven picture books in seven days! I know it sounds like madness, and it is. But the goal is not to have seven polished and perfect stories by the end of the week; it’s to counter procrastination and get those pesky, diamond-in-the-rough ideas down on paper!

My goal for Napibowriwee is to develop five original picture book stories complete with named characters, a plot structure, and developed dialogue. I’ve got three ideas locked and loaded ready for my attention. Paula proposed the theme “music” for this year’s Napibowriwee, so I will use that for my fourth story. I’m leaving the fifth story idea up to the muses; giving myself some freedom to improv!

I’m using Day 1 as prep! I’ve got my first few story ideas sketched out, my notebook is ready to go, and a good night’s sleep is in the forecast. Like many other writers, I’m balancing a full-time job with my writing conquests so most of my Napibowriwee work will be executed on the commute to and from work. This leaves little time for blogging so please follow me on Twitter @whatsticks for updates on my Napibowriwee adventure!

Will you be participating in Napibowriwee? What writing goals do you have for this week!? Leave a comment!

 

The Empire Tight Building

An opportunity to take a picture with an icon,
but that little boy would rather be anywhere else.

On the corner of famous Fifth Ave.
all the eager tourists break their necks
to capture the tower.

But not this kid.

“Smile!” encourages Mom.

He throws a glare away from her,
fists jammed in his pockets,
a scowl slapped on his face.

She snaps the picture anyway.

Once the tallest building in the world,
but at this moment –the tightest building in the world.

Weekly Meeting Notes

The Editor and I sit across from the VP in her sunny office.
I smooth out my skirt, cross my legs, and place my notebook on my lap.
I definitely look the part of Editor-in-the-making.

A quick glance.

The Editor has crossed her legs too.
This is how a good editor sits I think to myself.

She shares her thoughts on the manuscript we’re here to discuss.
I listen.
This is how a good editor listens.

The Editor is eloquent.
Each word flawlessly swan dives out of her mouth,
and summersaults onto the VP’s desk like a secret agent.
They gather and begin building a structure –her opinion on the manuscript;
a point of view so clear and concise it’s tangible.

I’m in awe.
This is how a good editor speaks.

I’m asked to share next.

Reluctantly, I speak.
Tiny words fall out of my mouth
in a hurried frenzy like
my ideas are a fire in the back of my throat
that should be escaped, not expressed.
My words hurtle toward the floor,
with no point to make,
no structure to build,
no parachutes.
I can almost hear them helplessly colliding with the carpet.
splat splat splat splat splat.

Sensing the absence of point from my view,
the VP’s eyes drift off.
I shut my mouth, extinguishing my idea-fire and
look down at the small pile of mangled letters
next to my shoe.

I feel a stab of pain behind my crossed knee.
I uncross my legs.

A quick glance.

The Editor’s legs are still crossed.

I’m not a good editor…yet.

 

Warm Words

On Saturday February 13th I braved frigid temperatures and biting winds as I ventured to the Grand Hyatt Hotel. There I joined 1,150 aspiring writers, illustrators, and publishing professionals at the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators’ 17th Annual Winter Conference. Once settled inside the ballroom lecture hall, we were introduced to our enthusiastic master of ceremonies. According to her calculations, the massive amount of conference attendees represented 48 states, 19 countries, and a wide variety of professions. Our first keynote speaker, author and animator William Joyce, shared an encouraging and humorous anecdote about his journey from hundreds of rejection letters to winning an Academy Award for Best Animated Short Film. He shared that at the heart of his success, as with every success in children’s publishing, is collaboration. He impressed upon us that collaboration is an enjoyable, valuable, and fundamental aspect of working and thriving in the publishing industry. His words helped set the tone of the conference by reminding participants to not just network, but connect with each other.

After the morning keynote addresses, we were dismissed to find our pre-determined morning workshops. The limitless potential of the day ahead manifested into a buzz of excitement as over 1,000 attendees hurriedly exited the ballroom and infiltrated the hotel corridors. My first workshop, Writing for a Diverse Audience, was led by Alvina Ling an Editor at Little Brown Books for Young Readers. She encouraged aspiring writers to write cross-culturally, but to do so while taking necessary measures including: reading diversely, researching stereotypes, and having beta readers read through a story for accuracy. Alvina shared that writing cross culturally should be approached with trepidation, but to then do it anyway. Lastly Alvina emphasized that the goal with creating a character of color, as with any character, is to design a well-rounded and fully developed individual.

After a hasty lunch, I hustled to my afternoon session, Revision, with Cheryl Klein the Executive Editor of Arthur A. Levine Books at Scholastic. Her power-point seminar walked attendees through twenty-one revision techniques. I took notes on techniques I believed will be most helpful to me when writing editorial letters, and providing critique on manuscripts. Klein also shared online tools that can help writers look at their manuscript from a different angle. One such tool is Wordle, a website that generates word clouds based on a manuscript’s word frequency. This can help writers see which words, themes, or characters are dominating their story, and which are not. Analyzing a manuscript using different layouts can be useful during the painstaking process of revision.

As the afternoon ended, the attendees reconvened in the lecture hall for a highly anticipated event: Q&A session with award-winning author, Rainbow Rowell. During the fireside chat-style interview, Rowell discussed how working as a journalist taught her to be a good listener, overcome writer’s block, and work on a deadline. She encouraged writers to start stories with the moment everything changes, use dialogue to propel plot, and assured us there is no secret, quick way to success; it’s just best to do the groundwork well.

After a lengthy autograph session with Rowell, the conference attendees paraded down to the dinning area for dinner. There I had an opportunity to mingle and meet Rainbow Rowell Autographother children’s book writers and emerging professionals. In this intimate, social setting I was finally able to witness and appreciate the great variety of conference attendees.

The next morning all of the conference speakers and attendees gathered in the ballroom lecture hall one last time time for closing remarks. Despite having gathered with the same people in the same room just the day before, I did not sense the same excited buzz I had previously. Instead of universal energy, there was collective exhaustion. The keynote speakers echoed the passive vibe of the audience, as they discussed quiet topics like teaching empathy, and story endings. In her keynote address, author Jacquelyn Mitchard discussed the difficulties with writing endings, which stories get them right, and how we as children’s book creators can leave readers more than satisfied. She explained that although there are several different kinds of endings they aim to achieve the same goal: fulfill the story’s initial promises and gently let the reader go. In many ways the ending of the conference did just that: it fulfilled its promises of being an insightful and memorable event, and with a thoughtful yet witty final remark, released the attendees back into reality more knowledgeable and inspired than before. Warmed by these words, I left the Grand Hyatt Hotel more resilient to the frigid cold and biting winds that whipped around me.

Favortie First Lines

If you’re not on Twitter and following me you should be because occasionally I have  moments of brilliance.

What’s the latest moment you ask? Oh nothing much, just an idea of epic proportions sure to sweep across the nation and blow everyone’s mind at once!!!

Okay, maybe it’s not that epic, but it is a great idea I hope you’ll take part in. Let me start from the beginning… *throat clears*

*dramatic music*

In a world filled with children’s books, words run rampant igniting all forms of chaos!  Yet amidst the fires of literary anarchy there rose a hero. Well, not so much a hero as a hashtag. But it wasn’t just any hashtag, it was the only hashtag powerful enough to restore order to the immensely unsettled literary lands. That hashtag was know as: #FavoriteFirstLines.

It’s soul purpose (Yes, I said soul purpose not sole purpose because this hashtag’s mission is rooted deeeeeeep in its very being.) is to be a means through which literary enthusiasts can share their favorite first lines of literature.

The first line of a story is the most responsible collection of words in the entire piece. It is burdened with setting tone, scene, and pacing of a story. If the story’s title is the address of a house ,then the first line is the front door. It’s that line’s job to give a potential reader the gist of a house they no little or nothing about, and convince him/her to cross the threshold. No easy feat.

As an aspiring children’s author and avid reader I’ve become a curator of first lines. Those stories with original, character-revealing, scene-setting, curiosity-poking first lines tend not to disappoint. It pays to pay attention to these lines and identify what makes some sizzle and others fizzle out.

I will be joining the other members of the social media universe in using #favoritefirstlines (because apparently this hashtag is already being used and I did not make it up as I thought I had a few minutes ago before I searched and found it on Twitter… *sigh* is there nothing new under the sun??) to share and collect my favorite first story lines. Please feel free to share your favorite first lines with me via Twitter @whatsticks or in the comments below!